Okay. Here’s the deal. I wrote a lot of SLAMMED from Will’s point of view while I was writing the initial book. Only because it helped me get inside his head and understand where he was coming from. I ended up putting it all together and could almost make a book out of it, but I’ve been hesitant. Not quite sure if people would even want to read it from Will’s point of view, since we all know how it turns out. I decided I would do a ‘back and forth’ thing between present and past, and I sort of like how it’s working out. However, I shelved it about a month ago and decided to give it a little more thought. But now I feel bad because I’ve got Will shelved.
Nobody puts Will on a shelf.
So here’s a rough draft of the first prologue and the first chapter to kind of test the waters. Let me know what you guys think.
March 3rd, 2012
If I took every romantic poem, every book, every song and every movie I’ve ever read, heard or seen and extracted the breathtaking moments, somehow bottling them up, they would pale in comparison to this moment.
This moment is incomparable.
She’s lying on her side facing me, her elbow tucked under her head, her other hand stroking the back of my hand that’s resting on her pillow. Her hair is spread out across the pillow, spilling down her shoulder and across her neck. She’s staring at her fingers as they move in circles over my hand. I’ve known her almost two years now, and I’ve never seen her this content. She’s no longer solely carrying the weight that’s been her life for the last two years, and it shows. It’s almost as if the moment we said “I do” yesterday, the hardships and heartaches we faced as individuals were meshed, making our pasts lighter…easier to carry. From this point on I’ll be able to do that for her. I’ll take her burdens, should there be any more, and I’ll be able to carry them for her. It’s all I’ve wanted to do for this girl since the moment I first laid eyes on her.
She glances up at me and smiles, then laughs and buries her face into the pillow.
I lean over her and kiss her on the neck. “What’s so funny?”
She lifts her face off the pillow—her cheeks a deeper shade of red. She shakes her head and laughs. “Us,” she says. “It’s only been twenty-four hours and I’ve already lost count.”
I kiss her scarlet cheek and laugh. “I’m done with counting, Lake. I’ve had about all the countdowns I can handle for a lifetime.”
I wrap my arm around her waist and pull her on top of me. When she leans in to kiss me, her hair falls between us. I reach to the night stand and grab her rubber band, then twist her hair into a knot behind her head and secure it. “There,” I say, pulling her face back to mine. “Better.”
She was adamant about having the robes, but we haven’t once used them. Her ugly shirt has been on the floor since I threw it there last night. Needless to say, this has been the best twenty-four hours of my life.
She kisses down my jaw and traces a trail with her lips up to my ear. “You hungry?” she whispers.
“Not for food.”
She pulls back and grins. “We’ve still got another twenty-four hours to go, you know. If you want to keep up with me you need to replenish your energy. Besides, we somehow missed lunch today.” She rolls off of me and reaches into the nightstand, pulling out the room service menu.
“No burgers,” I say.
She rolls her eyes and laughs. “You’ll never get over that.” She scrolls the menu and points at it with her finger, then holds it up. “What about beef wellington?” she asks. “I’ve always wanted to try that.”
“Sounds good,” I say, inching closer to her. She picks up the phone to dial room service. The whole time she’s on the phone I kiss up and down her back, forcing her to stifle her laughs as she tries to maintain her composure while ordering. When she hangs up the phone, she slides underneath me and pulls the covers over us.
“You have twenty minutes,” she whispers. “Think you can handle that?”
“I only need ten,” I say.
The beef wellington did not disappoint. The only issue now is that we’re too stuffed and too tired to move. We’ve turned the TV on for the first time since I walked her over the threshold, so I think it’s safe to say we’re due for at least a two hour break.
Our legs are intertwined and her head is on my chest. I’m running my fingers through her hair with one hand and stroking her wrist with the other. Somehow trivial things like lying in bed watching TV have become euphoric when we’re tangled together like this.
“Will?” she asks. She pulls herself up onto her elbow and looks at me. “Can I ask you something?” She runs her hand across my chest, resting it on top of my heart.
“I do about twelve laps a day on the University track, plus 100 sit-ups twice a day,” I say. She arches an eyebrow, so I point to my stomach. “Weren’t you gonna ask me about my abs?”
She laughs and playfully punches me. “No, I wasn’t asking about your abs.” She leans down and kisses me on the stomach. “They are nice, though.”
I stroke her cheek and pull her gaze back to me. “Ask me anything, babe.”
She sighs and drops her elbow and lays her head back onto the pillow, staring up at the ceiling. “Do you ever feel guilty?” she says quietly. “For feeling this happy?”
I scoot closer to her and lay my arm across her stomach. “Lake,” I say. “Don’t ever feel guilty. This is exactly what they’d want for you.”
She looks at me and forces a smile. “I know it’s what they’d want for me. I just…I don’t know. If I could take back everything that happened, I would do it in a heartbeat if it meant I could have them back. But doing that would mean I never would have met you. So sometimes I feel guilty because I–”
I press my fingers to her lips. “Shh,” I say. “Don’t think like that, Lake. Don’t think about what ifs.” I lean in and kiss her on the forehead. “But I do know what you mean if that helps. It’s counterproductive thinking about it, though. It is what it is.”
She takes her hand in mine and intertwines our fingers, then brings them to her mouth and kisses the back of my hand. “My dad would have loved you.”
“My mom would have loved you,” I say.
She smiles. “One more thing about the past, then I’ll stop bringing it up,” she says. She looks at me with a slightly evil grin on her face. “I’m so glad that bitch Vaughn dumped you.”
I laugh. “No doubt.”
She smiles and releases her fingers from mine. She turns toward me on the bed and strokes my face as we lie on our pillows and watch each other. I pull her hand to my mouth and kiss the inside of her palm.
“Do you think you would have married her?” she says.
I laugh and roll my eyes. “Seriously, Lake? Do you really want to talk about this right now?”
She shrugs. “I’m just curious. We’ve never really talked about the past before. Now that I know you aren’t going anywhere, I feel more comfortable talking about it. Besides, there are a lot of things I want to know about you,” she says. “Like… how you felt when she broke up with you.”
I sigh. “That’s an odd thing to want to hear about on your honeymoon.”
She smiles at me and shrugs her shoulders. “I just want to know everything about you. I’ve already got your future, now I want to get to know your past. Besides,” she grins. “We’ve got a couple of hours to kill before your energy is fully replenished. What else are we gonna do?”
I’m too exhausted to move right now and as much as I can pretend I’m not keeping count, nine times in twenty-four hours has to be some sort of record. I roll over onto my stomach and prop a pillow under my chin, then begin to tell her my story.
Four years earlier
“Goodnight, Caulder,” I say as I flip off the light, hoping he doesn’t crawl out of bed again. It’s our third night together, just the two of us. He was too scared to sleep by himself last night so I let him sleep with me. I’m hoping it doesn’t become a habit, but I would completely understand if it did. I still can’t wrap my head around all that’s happened in the last two weeks, much less the decisions I’ve made. I hope I’m doing the right thing. I know my parents want us to be together, I just don’t think they approve of me dropping my scholarship to make it happen.
Why do I keep referring to them in the present tense?
This is really going to be an adjustment. I make my way into my bedroom and throw myself on the bed. I’m too exhausted to even reach over and turn off the lamp. As soon as I close my eyes, there’s a tap on my bedroom door.
“Caulder, you’ll be fine. Go back to bed,” I say, somehow dragging myself off the bed again to coax him back to his room. He has successfully slept alone for seven years, I know he’s capable of doing it again.
“Will?” The door opens and Vaughn walks in. I had no idea she was coming over tonight, but I’m thankful she’s here. She seems to know exactly when I need her the most. I close my door behind her and wrap my arms around her. “Hey, babe,” I say. “What are you doing here? I thought you were heading back to campus today.”
She places her hands on my forearms and pushes back, giving me the most pitiful smile I’ve ever seen. She walks over to my bed and sits. “We need to talk.”
The look on her face sends a chill up the back of my neck. I’ve never seen her look so distraught before. I immediately sit on the bed beside her and bring her hand to my mouth and kiss it. “Babe, what’s wrong? You okay?” I brush a loose strand of hair behind her ear just as the tears begin to fall. I wrap my arms around her and pull her to my chest. “Vaughn, what’s wrong? Tell me.”
She doesn’t say anything. She continues to cry so I give her a moment. Sometimes girls just need to cry. When the tears finally begin to subside, she straightens back up and takes my hands, but doesn’t look me in the eyes.
“Will…” She pauses. The way she says my name, the tone of her voice…it sends panic straight to my heart. She looks up at me but can’t hold her stare, so she turns away.
“Vaughn?” I say hesitantly, hoping I’m misreading her body language. I place my hand on her chin, pulling her gaze back in my direction. The fear is clear in my voice when I speak. “What are you doing, Vaughn?”
She almost looks relieved that I seem to have caught on to what her intentions are. She shakes her head, “I’m sorry, Will. I’m so sorry. I just can’t do this anymore.”
Her words hit me like a ton of bricks. This? She can’t do this anymore? When did we become a this? I don’t respond. What the hell do I say to that?
She senses the shock in my demeanor, so she squeezes my hands and whispers it again. “I’m so sorry.”
I pull away and stand up, turning away from her. I run my hands through my hair and take a deep breath. The anger building inside me is suddenly coupled by tears that I have no intention of letting her see.
“I just didn’t expect any of this, Will. I’m too young to be a mom. I’m not ready for this kind of responsibility.”
She’s really doing this. She’s really breaking up with me. Two weeks after my parents die and she’s breaking my heart all over again? Who does that? She’s not thinking straight. It’s just shock…that’s all.
“Baby, I didn’t expect this either,” I say. “It’s okay, you’re just scared.” I sit back down on the bed beside her and pull her to me. “I’m not asking you to be his mom, Vaughn. I’m not asking you to be anything right now.” I squeeze her tighter and press my lips against her forehead; an action that immediately causes her to start crying again. “Baby, don’t do this,” I whisper into her hair. “Don’t do this to me. Not right now.”
She turns her head away from me. “If I don’t do this now, I’ll never be able to do it.”
She stands up and tries to walk away, but I pull her back to me and wrap my arms around her waist, pressing my head against her stomach. “Please.”
She runs her hands through my hair and bends down, kissing the top of my head. “I feel awful, Will,” she whispers. “Awful. But I’m not about to live a life that I’m not ready for just because I feel sorry for you.”
I press my forehead against her shirt and close my eyes, soaking in her words. She feels sorry for me? I release my arms from around her and push against her stomach. Her hands untangle from my hair and she steps back. I stand up and walk to the bedroom door, holding it open, indicating she needs to leave. “That’s the last thing I want you to do,” I say, looking her in the eyes.
“Will, don’t,” she pleads. “Please don’t be mad at me.” She’s looking up at me with tears in her eyes. When she cries, the color of her eyes turn a glossy, deep shade of blue. I used to tell her they were the exact same color as the ocean. Looking into her eyes right now almost makes me despise the ocean.
I turn away from her and grip both sides of the door, pressing my head against the wood. I close my eyes and try to hold it in. It feels like the pressure, the stress, the emotions that have been building up for the last two weeks–it feels like I’m about to explode.
She gently places her hand on my shoulder in an attempt to console me. I shrug it off and turn around to face her again. “Two weeks, Vaughn!” I yell. I realize how loud I’m being, so I lower my voice and step closer to her. “They’ve been dead for two weeks! How could you possibly be thinking about yourself right now?”
She walks past me through the doorway and down the hall toward the living room. I follow her as she grabs her purse from the couch and walks toward the front door. She opens it and turns to face me before she leaves. “You’ll thank me for this one day, Will. I know it doesn’t seem like it right now, but someday you’ll know I’m doing what’s best for us.”
She turns to leave and I yell after her, “What’s best for you, Vaughn! You’re doing what’s best for you!”
As soon as the door closes behind her I break down. I rush back to my bedroom and slam the door, then turn around and punch it over and over, harder and harder. When I can’t feel my hand anymore, I squeeze my eyes shut and press my forehead against the door. I’ve had so much to process these past two weeks–I don’t know how to process this, too. What the hell has happened to my life?
I eventually make my way back to my bed and sit with my elbows on my knees, head in my hands. My Mom and Dad are smiling at me from the confines of the glass frame on my nightstand, watching me unfold. Watching as the culmination of all that has happened these last two weeks slowly tears me apart.
Why weren’t they better prepared for something like this? Why would they risk leaving me with all of this responsibility? Their ill-preparedness has cost me my scholarship, the love of my life and now, quite possibly, my entire future. I snatch the picture up and place my thumbs over their photograph. With all my force, I squeeze until the glass cracks between my fingertips. Once it’s successfully shattered–just like my life–I rare back and throw it as hard as I can against the wall in front of me. The frame breaks in two when it meets the wall and shards of glass sprinkle the carpet.
I reach over to turn off the lamp when I hear her open my bedroom door again.
“Just leave, Vaughn. Please.”
I look up and see Caulder standing in the doorway, crying. He looks terrified. It’s the same look I’ve seen so many times since the moment our parents died. It’s the same look he had when I hugged him goodbye at the hospital and let him leave with my grandparents. It’s the same look that rips my heart in two every time I see it.
It’s a look that immediately brings me back down to earth.
I wipe my eyes and motion for him to come closer. When he does, I wrap my arms around him and pull him onto my lap, hugging him while he quietly cries into my chest. I rock him back and forth and stroke his hair until his tears begin to subside. I kiss him on the forehead and pull him closer.
“Want to sleep with me again tonight, Buddy?”
March 3rd, 2012
“Wow,” Lake says, quietly. “What a selfish bitch.”
“Thank God for that,” I say. I clasp my hands together behind my head and look up at the ceiling, mirroring Lake’s position on the bed. “It’s funny how history almost repeated itself.”
“What do you mean?” she says.
“Think about it. She broke up with me because she didn’t want to be with me just because she felt sorry for me. You broke up with me because you thought I was with you because I felt sorry for you.”
“I didn’t breakup with you,” she says.
I laugh and sit up on the bed. “The hell you didn’t! Your exact words were, ‘I don’t care if it takes days, or weeks or months.’ That’s a breakup,” I say.
“It was not. I was giving you time to think,” she says, defensively.
“Time I didn’t need,” I say with certainty. I lie back down on my pillow and face her again. “It sure felt like a breakup.”
“Well,” she says quietly, looking at me. “Sometimes two people need to fall apart to realize how much they need to fall back together.”
I take her hand and rest it between us, then stroke the back of it with my thumb. “Let’s not fall apart again,” I whisper.
She looks me in the eyes. “Never.”
There’s a vulnerability in the way she looks at me in silence. Her eyes scrolling over my face, her mouth curled up in a slight grin. She doesn’t speak, but she doesn’t have to. I know in these moments when it’s just her and I and nothing else, that she truly, soul-deep loves me.
“What was it like the first time you saw me?” she asks. “What was it about me that made you want to ask me out? And tell me everything, even the bad thoughts.”
I laugh. “There weren’t any bad thoughts. Naughty thoughts, maybe. But not bad.”
She grins. “Well then tell me those, too.”